Amidst the night, the poet's mind awakes
= awakens

another great write.

I really like your ending in particular with your word choice, gnawing is such a powerful word and you used it well. And the silence to end the poem with relates really well to your message and the longing and desperation for this person's love.

I also like all the night time imagery. Worked well with your theme and your title.

Good job