by Esperanza N M Ramirez Feb 8, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You are the closet I ever felt to happiness you are the only thing that meets the type of happiness I've been searching for my whole life, everything that I've ever wanted. It is you that I want so dearly sweetheart it is you it will always be that way till my last breath. |
by Midnight Sky
Well written my friend :) |
:) Thanks. |
by Beautiful Soul
I like the message of this poem a lot. I think if you put it into stanza form though it would read better :). That's just me. The poem is very simple but has a lot tp say. You really love this person and you want to be with them for the rest of your life. The wording is very loving and sweet. Very nice overall |
I thought the same too, thanks :) |