by Brandon Evans Jul 4, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A pair of innocent youths, |
by xo kisses xo
Omg...that is a great poem...you are really talented...and that must have come straight from you heart. i'm really sorry about you and your girl...i hope that one day everything will work out |
by sarah k
holy sh*t! that poem is so amazing! wow! its so sad! its just filled with so much emotion! you are truly and amazing poet! i gave you a well deserved 5 wishing i could only vote higher. |
I really liked this poem. Gave it a **5**. Keep up the good work. Maybe someday if you were meant to be you will se her again. If you have time please check out some of my poems and possibly rate them and comment on them. Thanks. Much Love. Keep up the great writing. |
by nikki
that poem was just...... so...... i'm speechless, it was so perfect, and it really captured the extreme feelings of love and the pain that comes with abortions, one of my best friends got pregnant to the guy she loved when she was 15 and they both wanted it because it really felt to them like it was a symbol of their love, like you said, and their parents tried to force her to have an abortion, and she wouldn't, and the guys parents moved a state away so that they couldn't see each other, but now they are 18 and they have moved in together and they are getting married and raising their kid, anyways i really loved your poem, great work! |
by Vanessa
I am just another one who will compliment you on your work. Maybe you wont even find the time to read this simple compliment coz of the many critiques out here to compliment your work.... so... just for my conscience to shut up...Good work... |