by Beautiful Soul
This is a very unique poem Andrea :). I loved how you seemed to take the darker side of the morning. The imagery again is very vivid and each line speaks it's own story. The shadows dance with the candle flame. Or a flamed candle. Each detail goes well with what you were trying to emit I feel. Like candles and witches and shadows and silhouettes. You did an excellent job with that. Each line gives a chill to the reader and the ending is very dark indeed. :). But you did such a great job with this one. Perfect |