I cry, not sure why

I understand this feeling so well and my heart goes out to you. Dealing with shifting moods is not easy. One minute we are happy the next we cry. It takes an very understanding person to deal with our daily struggle. Excellent write

This is a really good poem you have written. Here it seems like each stanza begins the downfall pf your life and at the end it becomes your lowest point. You have written your emotions well here. I think we all have mood swings indeed. Even one thought can make us sad. The tone here is sad through out and you stay consistant through out and that is really well done. :)

Ty my young friend

don

Awefully sad poem but good work