Oh my, this is indeed a gem of a read. Congrats
on the win too my dear. From start to end the images and emotions just pours out...beautifully penned.

Nicely done here 5\5

I instantly felt nostalgic when reading this...it reminded of the days when I was a little and my mom would take me to church. And just witnessing the many people in deep prayer, while I twiddle my thumbs naive to everything but my own childish thoughts.

"with no purpose, other than to held the"
^I believe held should be hold here.

Beautifully penned piece, much enjoyed!