What is peace
by Thandie Feb 10, 2014
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Where is peace?I never find peace in this misery home.All l could get was pain,sorrow,hurt.I tried to ignore that and be strong but l failed.I cry all night because the is no peace at home.They hurt me and the is nobody care about that.Peace where is you?Maybe l could go to my heavenly father,maybe oeace is waiting for me there.Peace where are you? |
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10 years ago
by LittleMsPink
Some corrections
(I cry all night because the is no peace at home)
the should be there
(They hurt me and the is nobody care about that.)
i think you should remove "the is" & try care's
(maybe oeace is waiting for me there.)
oaece = "peace"
i think you were in a rush while typing this
but all in all. i think the poem was great
short but really heartfelt :) -
10 years agoby Midnight Sky
Short but powerful nicely done :)
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10 years ago
by don
Seriously emotional, raw, heartfelt write, its beautifull describt poem, about the inner content, likes this a lot
don
