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This is a really sad poem :(. One small error though. Third stanza- first line, allows I think you mean allow us?... other wise, The hint of sadness is very strong here and I can tell you are grieving for a fallen friend. This poem allowed you to get your feelings out I feel. The wording flows very smoothly here. Each stanza also packs it's own punch. The first stanza was my favorite because it's really hard to live when you are thinking about somwone in peril. So I pictured a person who cannot think at all or focus on what they want or have to do. Nice simple but powerful write