by Maher Feb 12, 2014
category :
Life, society /
other
Where snowflakes fall and fluid flows chilled, |
by Aiko Hiraeth
I LOVE long detailed poems like this. What it presents itself to my mind as is a "review", basically, in poem form, of the world itself. How the humans have made the world, the monster the world has made itself, yet a changing one that tries so hard to become better. It has so much pictures within the words. |
by Maher
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! :) |
WOW. Beautifully written. Excellent use of feelings and raw emotions. And I agree, sometimes the best things just flow out without even trying. |
by Maher
Thank you for taking the time to read my work - very much appreciated :) |
by Angel Tears
Wow.. This was just beautiful. There's nothing else I can think to say! |
by Maher
That is more than enough, thank you! :) |
by BlueJay
This piece is well worth its win. The style is wonderful and the word choice worked very well in this piece. Absolutely love this write :) |
by Maher
Thank you, I really appreciate that :) |
by Maple Tree
Elegance is the first word that describes this piece, true Elegance! |
by Maher
Thank you kindly! Unlike some of my others, this one just flowed right out. The ones that come from the heart, are based on actual happenings or truths and hold a close connection with what I and others experience from day to day, are often the ones that have the most impact on others. I don't mean to sound conceited or anything, but it's true for a lot of writers on here and I'm sure they will attest to it too :) |