The last stanza is amazing, as is the whole poem. Great work, keep it up. :)

The opening of this piece got my attention instantly and the piece never let me down. The third and final stanzas were my favorites out of this piece - they just leave an impression that is phenomenal in its darkness. I enjoyed the word choice and how it didnt have to be that strong to give this piece an impact unlike most. The way your voice is expressed here is completely unlike any I have found here yet.

At first this piece struck me speachless and all I wanted to say was how extraordinary it is. But I figured it deserved more. The imagery is stunning and all in all it is wonderfully penned.