by Everlasting Feb 13, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I felt and I feel this feeling in me |
The feeling of love amazingly felt....... |
by gumshuda
Ohh lol... |
by Everlasting
You know, I love writing in this style the most. I tend to identify with it more. Thank you for reading. |
by Meena Krish
...and that is the feeling of love! |
by Beautiful Soul
Hi Lucero, I've been meaning to comment but I really loved this poem. The feelings you feel is a great feelinglol. Anyways I think what you are saying here is love is just something you feel inside of your heart. Love just is and it is just something you feel. You can't force it atall. This poem has a iirony to it you write about feelings but it is something you don't know a lot about. I love that so much. The repeating lines bring so much to this poem. :). Anyways you have written a very clever poem. Well done! |
by Everlasting
Lol very true, it is a great feeling. Thank you |
by Hellon
I don't know why but this poem so reminded me of Marie from The Sound of Music (hope you are familiar with it) when she's falling in love with Captain Von Trapp but doesn't recognize the feeling because she's been in a convent for so long. It was a bit f a tongue twister but that made it even more appealing for me....enjoyed!!! |
by Everlasting
Lol thank you |