Good poem but it lacks that pop feeling to it maybe give it more pop :) but still good

Interesting juxtaposing here. The subject seems to be sad and melancholy, but the presentation is almost silly in its candid repetition.

I don't know why but this poem so reminded me of Marie from The Sound of Music (hope you are familiar with it) when she's falling in love with Captain Von Trapp but doesn't recognize the feeling because she's been in a convent for so long. It was a bit f a tongue twister but that made it even more appealing for me....enjoyed!!!

Hi Lucero, I've been meaning to comment but I really loved this poem. The feelings you feel is a great feelinglol. Anyways I think what you are saying here is love is just something you feel inside of your heart. Love just is and it is just something you feel. You can't force it atall. This poem has a iirony to it you write about feelings but it is something you don't know a lot about. I love that so much. The repeating lines bring so much to this poem. :). Anyways you have written a very clever poem. Well done!

...and that is the feeling of love!

I like the tongue twisting ways and the flow in this write. I could imagine you saying this out a loud while penning it...good one!

Ohh lol...
This poem is like one of the tongue twisters..I guess there is a tongue twister category here too if you want to put it there :P

Truthfully, I love such kind of poems, you make me read it twice or thrice...slowly and carefully so that i understand in what sense have you used each feel.It's really amazing how you write such Marvelous poems..that too all different styles.

I really have no words to describe this poem...yes, it was that good. :)

Keep writing sweet luce. :)

The feeling of love amazingly felt.......