I am really happy you put a new poem up :). Butterflies is a perfect title I feel. Because love really makes you feel happy. And butterflies make you feel happy inside. You did a great job expressing how you really felt with the simple wording but you made the imagery vivid. It always seems like without the other person you feel nothing so I liked how you said that as well. The "double" side of love is a great thing to write about because you can express freely how it feels. You expresaed well how much you fall in love more and more and you male the characters shine in that way. I thought the last stanza rings very true. When you are in love you always grow. The rhyming was great too. It's simple but you got your point across well. Beautiful write!

This is a really sweet little poem and I really enjoy it.You did well with the rhyming and with the ease of the flow and style combination. Great write. Amazing job.

Beautiful