Comments : Ghost

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Another great one keep it up :)

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Sad and dark, good write :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    This is a good one, deep.
    "I'm the adventurer who only found dirt.
    I'm the worm that clogged the machine."
    I liked this the best, I know what you mean.
    Kept wanting to title it, "I Am Ghost" which is the name of a pretty good band :) Keep up the good work, your stuff reads very well! 5/5 ~Tara

    • 10 years ago

      by Postguied Parnell

      Thanks!
      I didn't know if anyone would appreciate the worm that clogged the machine bit.
      It was a vision that I once had that made me so sick that every time I thought about it for the next few weeks it made me become nauseous

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    This is a good one, deep.
    "I'm the adventurer who only found dirt.
    I'm the worm that clogged the machine."
    I liked this the best, I know what you mean.
    Kept wanting to title it, "I Am Ghost" which is the name of a pretty good band :) Keep up the good work, your stuff reads very well! 5/5 ~Tara