Unspoken words
by Esperanza N M Ramirez Feb 15, 2014
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Hold my hand tightly wrap me in your arms tightly speak the unsaid words you have been wanting to speak to me the longest. show me your heart share those sweet words I want to get so deeply lost in your love don't be afraid sweetheart cause I love you so deeply so endlessly, there no need to be afraid. Tell me the unspoken words because I would love to hear them from you. |
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10 years agoby Beautiful Soul
There are a couple of things to point out. I again think this would be better in a "stanza" format. And I believe the title doesn't do the poem justice. You could call it "unspoken words" or anything like that. Just what I think though :)
The poem itself is really lovely though and I loved the meaning behind it. Your wording is very simple but I can tell how much you really love this person and how much they have your heart. The last bit is really my favorite because when you are in love the unspoken words or gestures are the best kind. Love can be a very scary thing but you did well to pour your heart out. Beautiful!-
10 years ago
You have a point though that would be a better title :) I am going to change it to that because that is the point of this writing. Thankss. &I'll try to make it rhyme but I probably won't be able to it won't hurt to try though.
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10 years ago
by Midnight Sky
Sweet lovely poem my friend :)
