by Midnight Sky
Sweet lovely poem my friend :) |
by Beautiful Soul
There are a couple of things to point out. I again think this would be better in a "stanza" format. And I believe the title doesn't do the poem justice. You could call it "unspoken words" or anything like that. Just what I think though :) |
You have a point though that would be a better title :) I am going to change it to that because that is the point of this writing. Thankss. &I'll try to make it rhyme but I probably won't be able to it won't hurt to try though. |