by Donna B Feb 16, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
new love
The anticipation of the first kiss with someone you love |
I love the flow to this poem. Keep Writing. this is beautiful 5/5 |
by Donna B
Thank you so much. That is the type of feedback I was looking for. I wasn't sure. Thanks again. I try to capture the feelings and sensations of the moment rather than thoughts. |