Immersion

Where was love
in a dewdrop and rose
when your lips went dry.

^^I get an image of love that is fading, loosing its touch, its bond. That image is shown here with the words dew drop and dry lips.

The salt now speaks
of vacant eyes of a
covered nude.

^^This is a nice way of portraying the tears of a love that is waiting and pining for loves presence. Dressed in flesh but stripped of the feeling, like a bear tree.

Untitled my song. I
leave at your steps
for a waterfall.

^^A touching end. I can associate the waterfall to sadness, the pain and tears...very nice.

Enjoyed reading and beautiful written