Dang girl you have a talent really enjoyed

Another one I could relate to. You have such good flow in your poems, they just seem to flow together line by line.

The clear scene here in my head is that moment when two people who used to mean a lot to each other, pass each other in the street, almost like strangers. Only perhaps strangers would have even had nice glances at each other.

Emptiness pounding in your chest... such an incredible line. I can hear it, feel it, imagine it. It speaks so loud this line.

I like how you begin and end with the happy ending, also with the title being the same thought. The fact that it is placed in the sad category, gave me the clue that it is a happy ending you are longing for, but know that you can never get.

Another great job, well done.
Can't wait to check out more of your work

I like the feeling of this poem. Although its sad and quite heartbreaking this poem pulls not only the attention of the reader but, the heart and mind also. Great job, I look forward to reading what else you've got posted and what you will post in the future.