Great write

Hi miss Karla. This poem really spoke to me because of the hidden message behind the words. I thought the title was very interesting because when I read the poem I thought it could be about the person you are inside. Or even the person you were in your past. Because you can see yourself when other's just see you on the outside. It's hard to show people who you "really" are. We always treat ourselves badly but there is such kindness in others. Overall this poem is fantastic to show the message of how humans really are. We hold sadness inside our soul when we show our happiness to others. Holding onto what we haveto not have others judge us. I really liked the second stanza when you said touch the night sky for that could be a mmetaphor for the world you live in. I loved the simplicity of your poem but I saw the sadness tone through out. Beautiful write. Nominated!

Bravo here enjoy it deeply :)