This one reminded me of d spiderman flick wherein green goblin has d same feelings...:)

I like the darkness to this, nice opening stanza. Sets the tone really well and leaves us in no doubt that this is going to be a sad/dark poem.
You surrender to the darkness very early and seem to embrace it. By the end you want to drag somebody else down to your level also.
Nice end, the turnaround complete.

possible nit 3rd line from end, either you should be you'll or be should be become.
nice write.

I really got sucked into this poem. I like the dark feeling it gives off as well as intriguing. I only love the way you wrote the title. Nice work.

Boom! This hits you really hard. The darkness is wonderful here and the title fit with the poem well. I didn't expect anything like this. The way you used skeletons in the closet is great. The question of the second stanza I liked Because it is easier to give up then fight. You can't see in the dark at all so I liked how you say fight. There is no light so you can't see what the demons are doing. There is a very lonely tone to this yes. But it seens like the demons are your only friends. The story enfolds nicely I think. At the start you fight but by the end you embrace and welcome them. The twust is lovely and I like the space between each line at the end. Tbey are now yours. Beautiful write

Whooaaa....loving this actually... I think the message here , well not even message, but the topic of the poem is lost identity, confusion. Sometimes we think the other person is the problem, when really it is us. And all along we thought we were saving someone but our ignorance blinded us, we were really dragging them down...so many people are in this situation and don't realize their negativity or bad attitude can come across as basically the monster, not the victim.

Nice touch of darkness here, I enjoyed it.

I love your writing.

Grate write. It's dark and spoke directly to
that piece of lost darkness within me ...thank you