by Kakera Feb 19, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
2014-02-19 19:31 |
The subliminal messages in this poems really do shed light and pant a picture of many shades and colors. From the lightest of grey to the darkest black. (Not glossy black but, matte black) Another Great poem. Keep your head up. |
by Midnight Sky
Well great job felt sadness in here you are a great poet :) i saw you made it longer i think it's better title couse you said it in the poem |
by Midnight Sky
Very sad poem here ? is it about someone dying? |
by Kakera
That's a part of it, yeah. I wrote this with more than one meaning, all of which are based in a chain of events leading up to the ending of this poem, but most of those other meanings are hidden in the implicit, the undertones. |