Comments : The Sanzu River
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10 years agoby Midnight Sky
Very sad poem here ? is it about someone dying?
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10 years ago
by Kakera
That's a part of it, yeah. I wrote this with more than one meaning, all of which are based in a chain of events leading up to the ending of this poem, but most of those other meanings are hidden in the implicit, the undertones.
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10 years ago
by Midnight Sky
Well great job felt sadness in here you are a great poet :) i saw you made it longer i think it's better title couse you said it in the poem
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10 years ago
The subliminal messages in this poems really do shed light and pant a picture of many shades and colors. From the lightest of grey to the darkest black. (Not glossy black but, matte black) Another Great poem. Keep your head up.
