by Midnight Sky
Lot of emotion in sadness in here great job |
by Wicked Ways
Woahhh I love every part of this I could honestly tell that you really laid it all out for this poem and really shows , the depth of sorrow in this poem speaks for itself I really feel the vulnerability in this so much it makes me a little vulnerable but I guess that's what happens when u read a poem u relate so well too. love the strength I read in the end great way to end this poem :) |
I wanted to cry to be honest. This hit close to home, except I was never pregnant and I never heard God's voice, but he did save my life when I was about die in my own way. I admit this is beautiful, I would go back to check the grammar, some parts didn't quite fit, the spelling was fine, but some parts just were no lol please don't take offence. |