This is a beautiful poem saffie. this poem shows how much you really care about your mother and it seems like she has helped you through a lot in your life. I loved the first stanza because it shows how much you care and how much you hurt when your mother cries or hurts.

Second stanza last line- me should be my

The second stanza holds a lot of hope and though you have been through darkness your mother is your hope. The last stanza is beautiful as well because that's where you show your love and the closeness you have with her. I liked how you started each stanza with "Beautiful mother" Because it's a great dedication. Then overall you again show how much you care.

This is so beautiful and I can feel the love you have for your mother. You could not ask for a better friend. A mother loves us no matter what and always reaches out.

Wow saffie this is a beautiful poem this girl telling her mother all the things a mother wants to hear it is a heartfelt poem

the second stanza my favorite

beautiful mother
you are my world
my sunshine on a rainy day
my strength, my hope
my friend

that was so breath taking i love the sunshine on a rainy day part that's telling her the sun will shine if she around loved this thought out poem beautiful job saffie peace&love midnight sky