Here I really loved the title fir the poem. You compare this person to an angel and it seems like throughout the poem you are the angel. Though I think you can say both are angels watching over each other. This is a beautiful dedication because this person is very close to you and I can telk that. Your wording is very delicateand loving so that is another mmetaphor for an angel. There is so much light in having a close friend. Again the wording os very sime but you send so much love from your heart. Overall this is a great poem because it shows how much you care.

I love you Saffie, thank you so much for this, you are my Angel, you always have the right words and you know how to make this heart of mine smile and feel loved. I am so thankful and blessed to know you and have you be a part of my life.

It sounds like a true Angel sent from heaven. Whoever has you in their life is very lucky