by Beautiful Soul
This is a very detailed and immense haiku hellon. I really enjoyed the image of the butterfly but you don't really know it's a butterfly until the end. But you wrote about each beauty nature holds. First the wings being gossamer being thin and frail. But in that there is colour. |
Very beautiful haiku. |
Such a delicate piece, like that of this butterflies wings. Sometimes, we focus too much on the hustle and bustle of daily life that we forget the to take in the beauty of it. No wonder childhood is so magical..beautiful work. |
by Maple Tree
This is beautiful Hellon, very pretty haiku!! |
by Ole Carsten
So cute and lovely |
by Kiko
Hellon, |
by mossgirl19
I think it's not so dressed up and the scene was clear at first reading. Haikus have evolved. Cliches maybe but as it had painted the scene well it suits me. :-) I do think this is lovely. |