Comments : Be Still

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Strong words, i think this poem is dark and great

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

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  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow incredible! You have made an excellent point with this poem, so true how our systems in place can fail those who deserve so much better than what they receive.

    Again I liked your layout and your wording, as well as your flow and subtle rhyming in parts.

    Nice work