by Baby Rainbow Feb 23, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I miss the years that we were |
by Meena Krish
Its always that one special person who heals everything, the one we wish for the most when we are breaking down...touching and beautifully penned. |
There is always this one certain special person that will remain in our heart. From my own experience when we feel sad or a little down we do think about the times we shared and dreaming about future memories. Great write |
by Vanessa
I love this. It's short, but it explains so much. Keep writing :) |
by Beautiful Soul
I like this poem a lot because a lot of people can relate to it. When our hearts feel lonely we always think about our memories we once lived. It's hard to do though, it's really hard to heal from what once was. The poem I like as a whole because it seems to be a flashback. It's between past and present you are thinking about the person that you once loved and you want them or someone like them now. When your heart hurts it's really hard to heal. I liked the first stanza because I feel like it sets up the poem nicely and throughout the tone of sadness is wonderful. The ending is well written as well for again the past is easy to "be happy in" but it affects your present. Beautiful write! |
by Midnight Sky
Sad poem it seem you had a beautiful relationship then it was gone and wanting back but you know it can't be so you are stuck thinking of what you had sad poem p&l midnight sky |