This poem is filled with such personal little details, it shows such a close bond, it was a nice touch. The little things you love, the deep emotions you feel for them, and hope they feel for you too. It also shows the insecurities that can arise in any relationship, and the doubt that sometimes lingers.

I like how you open the poem with saying you are being honest, and not trying to show off too muchw ith words, but showing the truth of how you feel.

Remember I should always be capital, so you might want to edit all of those in your poem.

A long, but nice poem. I am sure many will relate to parts of this poem.