Clueless <3

by LittleMsPink   Feb 25, 2014


I told you that "i fell in love,
that girl's the one i'm dreaming of"

You told me " why not ask her out?
your love for her seems like no doubt "

I told you that " i know, its true..
but sad to say, she has no clue

I've loved her since the age of ten
We've always been the best of friends

I know her weakness, i know her flaws
I know the silly things she does

Shes now 16 but acts like 10
She loves to play the game pretend

She talks in her sleep & snores aloud
She burps so loud yet seems so proud

She loves to squeeze into her jeans
She can't balance, but still wear heels

She can't sleep without her bear
She has more flaws, but i don't care

I love her truly, with all of me
and hope that somehow she could see."

And then you looked into my eyes
You seemed to look like so surprised

"That girl.... she sounds a lot like me...
I wonder who that girl could be" :O

I smiled and said, "I know, its true, :)
And until now she has no clue"

~# LittleMsPink

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  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Well done, continue writing and experimenting with the iambic. You are doing a pretty good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by NiXiT

    A fun subject. I really liked the formatting of this one. Simplistic rhyme scheme but it really worked for this kind of poem. I enjoyed the short burst stanzas.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This yes a lovely poem enjoyed this alot great job you have a greatness about you your poems speak volumes never know what you getting but you always know it's gonna be great same here my friend p&l midnight sky