Comments : False Kindness

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This poem makes me think of fall time really good times ty for taking me down memory lane salfie p&l midnight sky

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Interesting isn't it on how easily we as humans fall into another's trap willingly due to false promises until its too late to back out. Life is such and I like how you have written this using wind and leaves. For those leaves are just like us. We grow, live and fall and someone charming comes along and blows us away...falling on the wrong direction.

    I also like how you manage to keep your poems in the right length without using too many words and at the same time get the message across..well done.