Secret Bruises

A mirror does not lie and yes often we hide behind a mask which I call make up. It makes us feel more secure.
Great write

I think for this poem the title is more powerful then the poem. But they both work so well together. The title itself could be "the ending" but it's teally the deeper meaning. Anyways. This girl or women obviously was very hurt by herself or a friend she thought she loved. I did love the double view point though. The first part is about the women herself and the way other people see her. The "smile" is her way of hiding what's inside. The mirror side is the side she see's inside of herself. A heart that is crying for help but no one can hear. This is a powerful short write but its great. :)

Dang salfie even your short poems are great i loved it sad this girl don't want the world to see her i like the mirror part only a mirror truly see's her tear's but it is alot of emotion put into it this i saw sad yet beautiful written hope that girl find's a place in the world always peace&love midnight sky