Chasing Time

I liked this poem for the challenge, you used the prompt well, and told the truth of life. We spend too much time, chasing time, when time is not outs. We waste it, and then regret the wasted time.

I liked the flow you had throughout.

And the line about being in the womb, then he tomb, was so unique to describe the Start and end of life.

Nice work.

That's reality, we spend too much time chasing time which we don't have, good piece. I love it.

I was unsure if this was written by you Mr.
But I think my intuition was right.

I did noticed the internal rhymes like womb and tomb in the poem. Meaning that since we are born to when we die.

There are a few others. I enjoyed this piece. Sorry for the rush comment. But great piece.