READ BETWEEN THE LINES

by ECILA ice   Mar 1, 2014


Scratch paper served its purpose
Merely her faithful home to lie down
Value possessed not by its maker
But the slippery slope lurking in every stroke.
Moment is caught until it turned antique,
This genius consummated every line.
Is it a compilation of well inked art,
Or just a set of turnish abstract?

**LONELY, CONFUSED.. Catch me before I hit the ground. I want to scream that line right now because that is what I'm feeling.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I envy the flow of this
    personally the only thing I would change is I would lose the "s" on strokes and lines and change it to every stroke & every line

    This is a great poem5>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like the flow the emotion was very nice and I like the ending it really is beautiful my dear 5/5

    -Bet

  • 10 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    It's a strong short poem!
    very sad one, it flowed well,
    but maybe you could elaborate more on your feelings, and you'll be able to catch more audience! you got potential

    cheers

    Robie Lincer

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    There's a lot of emotion in this poem....can feel your pain. Looking forward to reading more of your work! 5/5 ~Tara

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    There's a lot of emotion in this poem....can feel your pain. Looking forward to reading more of your work! 5/5 ~Tara

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