There's a lot of emotion in this poem....can feel your pain. Looking forward to reading more of your work! 5/5 ~Tara

There's a lot of emotion in this poem....can feel your pain. Looking forward to reading more of your work! 5/5 ~Tara

It's a strong short poem!
very sad one, it flowed well,
but maybe you could elaborate more on your feelings, and you'll be able to catch more audience! you got potential

cheers

Robie Lincer

I like the flow the emotion was very nice and I like the ending it really is beautiful my dear 5/5

-Bet

I envy the flow of this
personally the only thing I would change is I would lose the "s" on strokes and lines and change it to every stroke & every line

This is a great poem5>>>>>>>>>>>>