Write what you think about this its one of my newer ones i just wrote how i felt didnt care to write to make it look good so its not the best

Wow, that's good and scary how much I can identify with it too. I think you should take this, and your others, and develop the idea more. Go deep.

I dont uderstand how its scary like Shojo said, but it is definetly good. I like the deepth and emotion toward the poem. Nice work.

-Jennifer.

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