Comments : Cool as the Blue Sea

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wawaooooooooooo
    nice very nice. I am feeling very good after reading the poem.
    Like a dolphin
    I'll forever swim in your memories
    Until I find you
    My home will always be at your side

    very nice words

    f ever, I see you again someday
    Baby, I'll never, never let you go
    This love of mine is true
    I need you.

    this was also

    good work

    • 10 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you, Jyoti :-)

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A heartfelt write of love, unfaltering love and the last stanza wrapped it all up nicely. There is yearning in each line as well as hope. Lovely read, take care.

    • 10 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you Meena :-)

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Nicely done