Something

by Everlasting   Mar 7, 2014


There's something, something,
something about you.
The type of something
that makes me think there is
a thing in you.
The little something
no one else has.
The type of something
that makes me think
there's something
In You,
In Me
that could make us become
Something some day.

Feb 12, 2014

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    I love how you repeated the word something over and over, it made me smile :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I dislike love ppems very much buttt this one really captured my attention. So very well done for that. As I was reading this, I sang this in my head. It was very catchy. I liked the repeating word of something because it works well with all the places you used it. Now when you feel something for someone you just know it. There is no other feeling like it. All it has to be is one thing for your heart to go crazy. :). Anyways. Very unique write. Because you say a lot in such a short message. Beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That sounds like a making of a beautiful something..a nice read filled with that love in the air feeling!

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