Comments : Pirated.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Everytime, i read one of your poems, i keep thinking that writing in stanzas is restricting you of your potential.

    I feel prose will suit your style. i mean prose is not always dull. Its i guess changing. And i feel that if you write it in prose. Your ideas will have more room to be tighten well together. the reason i say this, might be a personal taste, but everytime i finish reading OnE stanza and i go into the next one, I have this feeling like I want that stanza to continue. As if it was a paragraph. You have the voice that draws me in, and I like that so much. I also like how you create imagery while sticking to your topic.

    • 10 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thanks for the advice Luce! I do see your point. I've written prose before, mostly when I went to get ideas done first and it's sometimes easier both with flow and formatting lines. Sometimes it does end too abruptly and I don't allow all my thoughts to be fully realized. I was actually thinking about journalism last night, censorship in China and other countries since I'm doing that for my research paper so I saw it first as a "post" or reflection on censorship. Might do some more prose in the future... thanks for the suggestion/encouragement

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I like this piece although i felt something was missing i don't what maybe it was how i keep wanting more of it but i did like the read it had a strong voice behind it i just wish more was told that's all but good job my friend peace&love midnight sky