by Tara Mar 10, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A girl once lived in wonderland, was privileged from the start; |
by Mello193
This was absolutely incredible. It brings up images of an abusive relationship. It was perfect. Great story. Great rhyming, great story telling. It was emotional. Awesome. 10/10. |
I didn't like the last line, perhaps it belongs in parenthesis as just an emotional addition to the poem, but the rest of it was a spot on, grade A story. Wonderful job! |
by Darclyfe
A poem like this defines the word experience. Even saying the poem flows like an open book and this was woeful but amazing tale. |
by Randy Lee
Time can be our enemy, and time can be our friend. I have missed you. |
by BlueJay
There is a lot more than story to this piece. it is a very decent piece and the emotion is extraordinarily well penned and clear. your descriptions and imagery were decent as well. |