The title itself speaks volume and in it there is deep sadness. Together with the write, loneliness, sadness and the absence of a missing person in one's life makes it more difficult to live...to breathe. Touching write.

I also love when people write sadness with the tone of nature. My suggestion for you though is I believe you used too much vocabulary. Especially for a short poem and to me it took away from the imagery and message you were trying to portray. Though I did like the message overall its hard to read in some spots. That's just my opinion though. I think what you are saying in the poem is that you lost your love and now you use nature to cslm you. You can hear this person's memory in the wind but you don't want to live without them. I think your strongest line is the last one because you want to join them in eternity. This really is a beautiful write. 5/5