by juss an allycat Jul 4, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Night after night I lay awake in bed |
lol ummm yeh, u compare ths with some more recent work and you can really see the growth of my ability. its not a gud poem at all but its gud to look back and see the way i wrote back then huh? lol |
by Allen
:) Nicely done :) A while back I can so relate to this poem... but no longer since my love life is in a different situation now... but regardless, good writing :) easy to read, nice flow, its like you speak your thoughts into the poem ;) Keep it up Alysse :) |
Thanx guyz, though you and I both know that I can do better. I havn't given up look out 4 more poems by me! |
by Jeni
That was really good. |