That was really good.
I like it.

Thanx guyz, though you and I both know that I can do better. I havn't given up look out 4 more poems by me!

xxoo,
alysse

:) Nicely done :) A while back I can so relate to this poem... but no longer since my love life is in a different situation now... but regardless, good writing :) easy to read, nice flow, its like you speak your thoughts into the poem ;) Keep it up Alysse :)

lol ummm yeh, u compare ths with some more recent work and you can really see the growth of my ability. its not a gud poem at all but its gud to look back and see the way i wrote back then huh? lol