Cool poem the image was perfect very dark

Love the vividness, Awesome poem.

The title honestly is perfect I feel because it goes with the poem well. It really doesn't draw attention and with the metaphor you wrote it flows smoothly. I thought the wording was great because the lines connect so very well as well. The story is vivid and beautiful. Though quiet dark you pulled me in as the reader and made me stay. Great work for that. Now for the poem.

Wow this is sad and dark. The first thing I will say is that death here seems to be your escape and your friend. The wording you used is dark but great because you placed words through oyt to enhance the poem :) anyway as the story enfolds you show more of the sadness of this personality and the hurt and pain they feel. It seems like all of this hurt has been built up and in this one day or night they finally decided to end it all. The knife is easy but it seems like this person was a cutter before so they are used to that feeling. The blood is just pouring out. The lines are so immense and intense. I like how through out there is sadness and at the very end there is a glimmer of hope when death was that last step to be free. Anyway. I like how you write about how death is not bad. We fear it but this person did not. Great write dear!

Excellent write