Wow, I really love this poem. Amazing job

Hmm, nice beginning, nice ending.

I have some nit picks in the middle section. I'm trying to think if it were the rhymes that got to me. Instead of pulling me in, they were pushing me to not continue reading but the ending tie it down. Sad piece.

Choosing lust for a lover.. is always sad. The title is fitting to the content. Good piece.