This has a lot of potential. :). First I want to point out the rhyming. To me it was very flawless. It didn't seem like to me you rhymed just to rhyme. Each rhyme fit the poem well and connected each line. For the the poem itself: I saw a lot of sadness within. I understand why you put it in the life category though. To me you are saying that the person and you that you love is going through a bad relationship and in the past it was much better before. The only way you felt alive or happy was when you started seeing this person. The flames of passion were there and now they are not. Anyways. I really wish I could nominate this. It's a great write