Comments : To Know You

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Indeed, trust, love, communication, and much more...

    This is a touching write, it moved me. Specially the part, without saying :I love you.

    The love is felt!

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Meena I agree with Lucero , This is a very touching write. I truly loved the wording you used here. And it is very true that love is not easily born. It really can take years to fall in love and once you get to know a person you become closer and closer. So I enjoyed how you wrote about two people falling in love. There are many souls in the world and when two connect it's a grear feeling. There is a gentleness you gave the personality of the characters which is nice because it fits the poem well. The tone does not stray. I really loved your last lines as well because sometimes "I love you" does not need to be spoken and you just know... your heart knows. Beautiful write

  • 10 years ago

    by William Mae

    Wow, the poem is touching.. It's real. It's truth... Life can be complicated, complicated beyond imagination. But love is open, simple, nothing complicated about a heart in love. The world may not know it. But the owner of the heart knows it. It need not be screamed from a tower. It can be whispered In the wind. Connected in words. But without one single word spoken it is confirmed in the hearts that feel it. This poem is touching.

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love this!

    The idea that love just doesn't happen, remain the same, never changing, and is flawless. Love is all the things you say, having to communicate with each other, voice opinions, worries and concerns. I like how you use the idea of something like trust, but then give it a part, like blooming, fed, then nurtured. all very key ingredients. I think forgiveness is so important because if we never forgive, we are never moving on, accepting the past, and accepting that person for the mistakes they make.

    I really like your second stanza, repeating the same line to start withm, and then adding a line that you realized, without realizing! This is so true. Sometimes we just suddenly click on to something, become aware of something that perhaps was a bit unclear before, or just never really thought of much.

    The ending is touching, to say I love you with tears instead of words, to say it without saying it. This raises an important issue also, as we tend to get out of the habit of saying, and showing our love to those we really do love.

    I really enjoyed this poem. well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Am without words to fountain the beauty of this poem I can only draw a portrait of it in my mind and hang it on the wall of my heart as a reminder of what makes love - Love. I love it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Yes, its never bloom easily,
    love is a real feel from heart.