by Everlasting
Indeed, trust, love, communication, and much more... |
by Beautiful Soul
Meena I agree with Lucero , This is a very touching write. I truly loved the wording you used here. And it is very true that love is not easily born. It really can take years to fall in love and once you get to know a person you become closer and closer. So I enjoyed how you wrote about two people falling in love. There are many souls in the world and when two connect it's a grear feeling. There is a gentleness you gave the personality of the characters which is nice because it fits the poem well. The tone does not stray. I really loved your last lines as well because sometimes "I love you" does not need to be spoken and you just know... your heart knows. Beautiful write |
by William Mae
Wow, the poem is touching.. It's real. It's truth... Life can be complicated, complicated beyond imagination. But love is open, simple, nothing complicated about a heart in love. The world may not know it. But the owner of the heart knows it. It need not be screamed from a tower. It can be whispered In the wind. Connected in words. But without one single word spoken it is confirmed in the hearts that feel it. This poem is touching. |
by Baby Rainbow
I love this! |
by DarkLight
Am without words to fountain the beauty of this poem I can only draw a portrait of it in my mind and hang it on the wall of my heart as a reminder of what makes love - Love. I love it. |
by Mohan
Yes, its never bloom easily, |