Sail from heart to
fingertip,

- Wow Hannah! This is so powerful, I adore this little image here of the words literally coming from your heart, right through to your fingertips and onto the paper! Wow!

like unswept glass

- seriously?? You have the most amazing metaphors up in your brain! I think this one stands out well because it shows how dangerous it is for the glass to be lying there, and also the pain it can cause.

waits like a question,

- dammit! This is so cool. I guess a question is always in waiting until we answer it, I never really thought about that before. Nicely done.

"Even beauty mourns."

- I love seeing little lines in poetry that really jump out and stand alone, this could be read alone and not need any words to back it up at all. Such a powerful line, meaning, and message. It opens up a whole avenue of thoughts.

Beautiful wording throughout the poem Hannah, nice story, as well as wording, and as always, a title that makes you go on google.

Brilliant job!