Comments : As i take the stage

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem.

    • 10 years ago

      by Thoughts unseen

      Thanks. That means a lot coming from you. I read and like a lot of your work. I actually wrote this right after reading one of yours.

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Well, I am glad that you like my poems. I will continue to read yours and Comment on them :) I did reread this and it kind of left me with alot of questions. Maybe it is because we do not know who is in the audience, or what is going on from there perspective.

    Overall, the poem was beautifully written.

    • 10 years ago

      by Thoughts unseen

      The audience is the readers of the poet's writings.
      The perspective is coming from the writer.
      I wrote this after reading one of your poems where a person said you should have ruled more. I disagree.
      Most if not all of my poems do not rhyme. I love poems that don't focus so much on rhymes. Its more important to get a real feel for what the writer is saying more than how much they rhyme. Your poem was perfect in my eyes and the person talking in this poem is more less pleading to be accepted as a non rhyming writer who just wants his/her words to be unchained and set free.